Sunday, 20 April 2014

Lady Ann's Folly: Chapter One - Part Nine

Ann waited in the holiday cottage feeling more and more nervous.
The longer the wait went on, the more she questioned the sensibility of her decision, but she kept telling herself that the time for doubt was over. She hated questioning herself once a decision was made; she just wanted to get on and do it now.
It was funny to think that this was the same place that had been used a month earlier to trade her former life of poverty and servitude for her new one of wealth and prestige. The memories of her former life as Burt were scant really now but if she concentrated, she could just about picture herself as the former stablehand, gazing in wonder as the former Lady Ann approached her wearing the pendant.
Had the transformation been painful? She couldn’t quite recall now. It had seemed queer, certainly, but she didn’t remember actual agony. Perhaps mild discomfort.
For some reason she was nervous to be meeting Mavis again. This would be their first conversation since she was a man. Obviously she felt entirely different now, but she couldn’t help wondering if she might fall into the old state of mind when confronted with the bawdy girl. It was ridiculous really. She was every bit the cultured lady of the manor now. She shouldn’t feel intimidated by a commoner, regardless of their background.
She went to the window and looked down the path, winding a clump of her dress in her hands, then she walked through to the bedroom; back into the sitting room.
Unlike she former Lady Ann, it hadn’t occurred to her to secrete a store of cash in the cottage to use in her new life, but even if it had she would have discounted it. There was no intention to remain a member of the working class for more than an hour or two so it would not be necessary. Perhaps this was foolish but Ann allowed no room in her mind for failure. It was going to work exactly as she had planned. She had sufficient payment to convince Mavis to go through with it.
She sat down, straightened her dress carefully and then noticed the primness of her posture. How different it would be when shortly she had made the transformation. She loved being an aristocratic lady but she had inherited enough of the original Ann’s persona to desire the freedom of lascivious promiscuity as well. How differently might she sit and stand and move when she turned into Mavis?
She had been a member of the lower class before but never as a woman. She wondered if being one might approximate the best parts of all aspects.
But no. She giggled. Remaining Mavis for the rest of her days was entirely out of the question. She’d had enough of being poor for one lifetime.
There was a sound outside and Ann got to her feet nervously.
Yes. Female chatter came from the path leading up to the holiday cottage and it was coming rapidly closer. There! Movement in the front window! Two figures approaching the door.
The front door shifted and Ann checked herself one final time, marvelling at how flighty she was feeling. It was a shade perhaps of the original Ann’s feeling prior to the first swap, for if gambling for money was a terrific thrill then gambling for destiny was one better. She didn’t know if she’d ever been so excited and it was only now that she allowed herself to acknowledge that her plan wasn’t foolproof. And to acknowledge that the risk was made it such a deliciously titillating endeavour.
A moment later, Mavis appeared in the doorway, Gladys behind her.
She looked proud and almost defiant, disrespectful of Ann’s authority; but only for a moment. This was followed by a slight crumpling as though she remembered herself and her station and accepted that Ann was her superior in every way.
“Ere you are m’lady,” said Gladys, appearing behind her.
“Thank you,” replied Ann. “You may leave us.”
“Are ye sure miss?”
“I said go Gladys. Must you question every instruction I give you?”
“Sorry m’lady.” She blushed, curtseyed and then hurried out.
This left just Mavis and Ann alone together and it came to Ann that there was nothing to stop them now. The exchange was going to happen in only a minute or two. Nothing could stop that now.
She fingered the pendant on her chest, then she looked Mavis in the eye and said, “I have a proposition for you.”

23 comments:

  1. I also love the fact that while wondering if she is going to slip back into old habits, it never occurs to Ann that she used to love Mavis.

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    1. You're right. That interest in the opposite sex seems to be one of the first things to acclimatise. Remember in LA1 where the former Ann was shagging Mavis and fantasising about bedding herself almost from the get go.

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  2. poor Gladys everyone is going to get a chance to lord it over her it seems...:)

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    1. Heh heh. She may get her chance one day!

      Though don't hold your breath...

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  3. It does make you wonder, did original Burt just not know Mavis (how much she wants out of Griply) or did that memory slip away when he became Ann. either way its funny to me because whether "he" never knew or she has forgotten, is proof that not everything is under her control.

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    1. You're absolutely right about her control.

      I guess we all have dreams about getting away and living a better life. Usually it's about whether we win the lottery or whatever. It doesn't mean it will ever happen. In almost all cases, we have those dreams and just go on living an ordinary life. I don't think Mavis is that different from anyone else in that sense.

      It's not like she's going to get the opportunity to follow those dreams...

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    2. "you can't always get what you want but if you try sometime you might find you get what you need"

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    3. We are never given a problem with also being given the power to solve it.

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  4. I think that Mavis once she is Anne won't swap back but might go with Richard to his home and meet his mother

    Rob

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    1. Hmmm. You could be right. But I suspect Ann would have something to say about it! And there's no guarantee the swap will happen yet. Don't count those chickens...

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  5. I could see Mavis swapping with Richard. and then Richard being swapped with Bert.
    It would be interesting to see Richard living the life of a servant.

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    1. Yeah. Apart from the fact I kind of hate him. He deserves some kind of comeuppance certainly.

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    2. I'm sure you'll think of SOMETHING APPROPRIATE to happen to him :)

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    3. You bet! Not for a while yet though...

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  6. I was just thinking something similar but with Mavis staying as Anne and Bert swapping with Richard and leaving the original Anne as Mavis and Richard as Bert.


    Rob

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    1. There is certainly an elegance to that...

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  7. funny thought, if Ann becomes stuck as Mavis, its still a step up from where "he" was a month ago. :)

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  8. Maybe the next time Burt swaps he should tell him self he is smart and can learn to read better.

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    1. Hmmm. It'd be interestingto see if that worked.

      I'm not sure whether the current Burt will be swapping again though. It was such hard work getting him to where he is now it'd be a shame to throw it all away!

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    2. that's assuming its his choice

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  9. Hi first post here.

    I finally read all of Lady Anne’s Holiday this morning and found it all very enjoyable as I like transformation stories anyway, so I’m looking forward to what happens next with Mavis. My favourite genre of stories incidentally being those where the woman is the one who is undergoing the transformations rather than the male, something that is very difficult to find.

    Although I have written one or two small things myself I much prefer reading other’s stories as I always lose interest in my own fairly quickly. However if I might be permitted to make an observation, I must confess that at times it became quite a struggle to keep going often having to come back later on, because whilst I found the obviously necessary and interesting internal debates and moralising struggles that all the Burts and Annes had to endure, they at times became a bit too repetitive as they kept on amounting to the same thing. Also I felt there were far too many occasions it became unnecessarily sexually graphic as well, as it did nothing to improve the underlying fine quality, prose and writing of the story nor its overall image, in fact and most unfortunately very much the opposite.

    Perhaps this repetitiveness is reflected in the large number of chapters I don’t know, but I would have much preferred to see a lot of these same internal debates trimmed down considerably without losing the core principles they represented so as to keep up the action and flow of the very interesting plot.

    Certainly one of the elements that I found most interesting of all, and this was right at the very end, was the overpowering temptation and lure factor of transforming itself experienced by the new Lady Anne when secretly watching Mavis. Something that the original Lady Anne did not feel primarily concentrating on what it would be like to be male and virile, at the same time to be able to get away for a while from the stifling and restricting attitudes and atmosphere of her family.

    Nonetheless reflecting back on the story as a whole.

    I think the primary main theme that stays in my memory is the gradual loss and erosion of gender identity they both went through, rather than any more surface sexual or other social behaviour aspects which would I would guess presumably be psychologically automatically assumed over similar time frames anyway.

    The other main theme that stays in my memory are some of the tense action and emotional scenes. For example Burt in despair in the prison carriage; the new Lady Anne struggling to write her first letter; Lady Anne in the abduction scene; the early experiences of the new Burt still flush with money in the pub; Burt slowly sinking further and further into servitude, especially with Jeb, without really knowing why; the enjoyment that the new Lady Anne feels getting her own back on the former Lady Anne and quite a few more which I think would have all been much more enhanced by the trimming down of some of the excess internal debates and struggles and unnecessary graphic sexual scenes.

    In other words more along the lines as outlined above would I feel have elevated a good and interesting story up to a much higher, more sensitive and memorable plane. Certainly it's more than obvious you have all the necessary skills and expertise in abundance !

    Look forward to the next instalments of Lady Anne’s holiday when it appears....

    Thanks for a great effort

    Paul

    One final thought. I think it would be very interesting if there was a limiting time factor built into the pendant which would slowly and inexorably reveal itself over say a period of a couple of weeks, so that the original Lady Anne and Burt found themselves gradually returning to their original bodies no matter what happened which I think would be the most romantic ending of all. On top of which there would be so many options to choose from as to how this could take place. Funniest of all can you imagine what everyone’s reactions would be during this period ? :D

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