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Hattie said and did nothing immediately.
Both Burt and she were once again frozen,
just as they’d been when he stumbled into her bedroom a few minutes earlier.
But his actions here were painfully obvious. There was no room for
misunderstanding.
He had entered the manor house against all
instruction, and worse, he had violated the bed chamber of not one but two of
the Earl’s daughters. And he was plainly a thief. The pendant was right there
in his hand. The lock on its hiding place was broken.
“Please m’lady,” stammered Burt. “I know
what this looks like but that ain’t wot it is. Just give me a minute to
explain.”
Hattie said nothing. Her features
registered still only shock.
For his part, Burt was still well and truly
off balance. As never before he felt trapped in this man’s flesh – no longer by
some continuing magical effect but simply by the physical reality of it.
Touching the pendant again had sealed the effect, closing him indelibly into
that identity.
“I know I shouldn’t ave come in ere,” said
Burt, his words spitting out rapidly, “but I ad to fetch something o’mine. This
ere pendant, see?” He held it up. “It’s mine ye see – you can ask er ladyship
erself – and I needed it.”
“So you decided to just wander up here and
get it?” said Hattie coldly.
Burt bobbed his head, only belatedly
thinking to pull of his cap, recognizing the deference to this woman that used
to be his younger sister.
“And to find it you riffled through my
sister’s clothes?”
Burt bobbed his head again.
“Through her undergarments?”
Burt did nothing. His face and neck turning
a deep and dirty red.
“And then you decided to break open her
dressing table drawer. Is that correct? You thought you could just take what
you wanted?”
Burt nodded pitifully. “Please miss. I ad
to get it. It was an emergency.”
“An emergency?”
“Aye. I ad to ave it right away. I’m sorry
miss. I know it was wrong o me, but I’ve learned me lesson; I swear I ave. I
just needed to get it. Please don’t tell the Earl you saw me in ere. He’ll
punish me something chronic for this. I’ll be lucky if I don’t end up in
prison. And I didn’t mean no arm. I swear I didn’t.”
Lady Harriet’s face closed over, any
expression vanishing to become just blank introspection.
Everything that had happened and it came to
this: trapped in the body and brain of a dirty commoner, completely at the
mercy of what had once been his younger sister.
“Please m’lady,” he said. “What you
decide’ll affect the rest o’me life. I ain’t never done wrong by ye. Please let
me go back outside. I’m sorry I came in ere; I really am.”
“’Never done wrong’ by me?” said Hattie.
“’Never done wrong’?” She scoffed at him and Burt’s face fell. “You filthy
little man. How dare you!” She thrust out her hand, palm up. “Give me that
pendant. Now!”
Burt looked down at it, then up at Hattie.
She wasn’t going to help him. She wouldn’t let him escape. She was going to see
to it that he was punished. This was his last and only chance to keep hold of
the pendant.
But he had been in this situation before –
the pendant in reach and an order from one of his betters to hand it over. He
knew he couldn’t keep hold of it. He knew what his orders were.
But there was another option here; surely
the only real option he had.
Put on the pendant. Embrace Lady Harriet.
Swap places with her!
All his problems would instantly go away!
“Give it me!” she snapped, pushing her hand
further forward.
Burt stared at the open palm then down at
the pendant. It would be so simple. So quick. He could be Lady Harriet; become
one of the gentry again, even if it wasn’t his original body.
“You will do as I tell you. Hand – me – the
pendant!”
It was so simple to conceive of but how
could he do it? He was being given a direct order from one of his betters – the
lady Harriet no less. He had to do what he was told.
“Give it to me!”
He looked into her face, at her pretty eyes
and dewy cheeks. He looked at her curvaceous body and beautiful dress. That
could be him. In a matter of moments he could change places with her.
But that sent a shudder of repulsion
through him. It didn’t matter that he knew who he used to be. He wasn’t a woman
no more. He was a man. He couldn’t imagine anything worse than losing his
manhood and becoming a soft and soppy woman. He wasn’t some sissy. Being a
woman was the last thing he wanted. He’d rather go to prison than that.”
“Burt!”
He wrapped up the pendant in its cloth and
hesitating only a second longer he passed it to her.
Hattie took it and held his gaze for a
moment then walked across to the dresser and closed the pendant and its bundle
back in the top drawer out of sight.
Burt waited, clutching his cap tightly in
his fingertips, fumbling with it nervously as she passed back into his field of
view. He felt abashed and utterly humiliated, and worse, he recognized the
chain of events his foolishness had thrown him into, leaving him incapable of
seizing a way out, even when one presented itself.
“I’m so sorry miss,” he fawned. “Please
don’t tell the Earl wot I done. I’ll do anything you say. I’m beggin ye. Please
don’t turn me in.”
Hattie looked at him blankly. Then she gave
him a slow sneer. She walked to the door, widened the gap and called out,
“Father!”
10
The tall man, Blake’s face made a grimace
as he ripped at Ann’s dress again, tearing the entire front open and revealing
her bosom and stomach completely, jerking another stifled cry from her gagged
mouth. The grimace became a leer as his eyes slithered across her naked torso
and legs.
The dress was a ruin now, covering only her
pelvis with any success, tears of it ribboning into the crooks of her elbows
and caught in the rope tying her wrists.
She wanted more than anything to be able to
fight her way free but she had inherited more than just the wiles, looks and
breeding of the original Lady Ann. She also had her cowardice and dismay at
violence of any kind. She felt completely under the power of this brute of a
man and his jeering audience in the doorway.
Never since this entire debacle had begun had
she been more determined to return to her former body and life, and she made a
vow, as the tears burned her cheeks and scorched her eyes, that the second she
had the ability to accomplish it, she would change back into a man.
“You’re mine you know,” whispered Blake.
“And you shouldn’t worry none.” He lowered his upper body closer to her. “I
ain’t like those apes out there. I’m a gentleman, me. I know ow to treat a
lady.”
He gave a deep chuckle then took hold of
Ann’s face, bringing his lips to hers.
She winced, trying to pull away, but there
was no strength in her to combat his. There was nothing she could do to stop
him.
Blake put his lips to Ann’s, pressing
close. Her cheeks were rigid. Her mouth was locked. Surely there could be no
pleasure of intimate contact for him. But as he broke contact she glimpsed the
swollen fold of cloth in his dirty trousers and knew what it meant. Then Blake
lowered his face to her breast, thankfully blocking the view.
He gave her one little glance and a smile,
almost playful, then he opened his lips to take her nipple in his mouth.
A man’s call came from out in the warehouse.
Blake faltered. There was a deep bang far away. Then a crash.
Blake lifted his head. The men in the
doorway had turned their backs. Two men out of sight were calling.
“See what’s going on,” barked Blake.
More shouting. A whistle, long an shrill. A
second whistle even closer.
The men in the doorway were shouting. They
vanished, running in different directions. Blake hadn’t moved. His entire body
was tense. He looked down into Ann’s face, his expression muddled.
Ann heard the word “Police!” shouted by
more than one male voice.
Blake pulled a knife out of his pocket.
The shouting got closer.
Blake’s hand rooted through the hair at the
base of Ann’s neck, taking hold tightly, snapping her head painfully back.
The shouting was even louder; even closer.
The knife caught what light there was like
a sliver of solid light.
Then a policeman appeared in the doorway.
He assessed the situation and demanded Blake step back.
Blake was wrenching on Ann, pulling her upwards,
holding the blade to her neck.
The policeman’s hand was out. Both men were
bellowing. Their words didn’t make sense.
Then the policeman was knocked out of the
way by a strong man’s hands and Richard strode into the room.
Blake was demanding something, pressing the
knife up under Ann’s chin. She was weeping in terror and anguish.
Richard said nothing. He took in the room
calmly, seeing Ann, seeing Blake, seeing the knife. Then he raised him arm,
leveled his pistol and pulled the trigger.
Blake fell backward. The knife toppled
clear. His head hit the floor.
And then Richard was at Ann’s side, lifting
her gently up, pulling the gag free, pressing her against his chest and
enfolding her in his arms. “It’s alright darling,” he said. “You’re safe now. I
promise. These men can’t do anything for you now.”
The policeman untied her wrists and she
flung her arms about her fiancé, tugging him even closer. “Oh Richard,” she
gasped. “Oh my darling Richard. Thank you! Oh thank God for you! Thank God for
my wonderful wonderful man!”
How screwed is Burt? besides he'drather go to jail than be woman. I wonder if that applies to Ann as well. poor Ann is stuck as well no Burt to swap back with -john
ReplyDeleteThis is one of those scenes that kind of just happened. The characters did what they wanted - I just watched and wrote it down. It's not looking good for poor Burt, you're right. But it does give me a chance to do something to him that I've been wanting for a while.
Delete(evil cackle)
I know the general expectation here was that Burt and Hattie would switch, but I still have plans for the former Ann (in Burt's body) and there will be plenty of room for that kind of thing in the sequel.
(another evil cackle)
Hope I didn't disappoint anyone but on the other hand, the pit that the former Ann jumped into just seems to keep getting deeper. I don't know about you guys but I'm enjoying watching her squirm.
(third evil cackle)
Emma
no worries I am not disappointed I am surprised but that's a good thing. although I can't help but wonder if they are going to try to kill Burt, tensions have to be running high thanks to the kidnapping and the earl doesn't strike me as the kind of person who would be troubled if he took his ire out on a servant? -John
DeleteI have tried hard to keep things as unpredictable as possible (no easy thing when expanding an existing work).
DeleteIt is a bit worrying about what is going to happen to Burt now though. You see, my hands are tied to some extent. I have to keep things relatively believable (within the fantasy context of the story).
With what he's been caught doing, Burt is surely in for some serious trouble. I want something bad to happen to him but I need him free and in the clear for what comes afterwards. The question is, can I wrestle with the realities of the plot to keep things on course or will Burt really be stuck paying for his crimes without even me able to save him!?!?!
One possibility is that the earl has just heard Ann is okay and he is so happy he decides to be merciful and not fire or jail Burt...but that wouldn't mean no punishment-john
ReplyDeleteCould work...
DeleteHow about "pendant of Loki" because it spreads chaos- john
ReplyDeleteI'm more of a believer in keeping things mysterious. Once you start naming things it takes away that mystery.
DeleteThanks for the suggestion though.
Emma
more of a joke and I forgot not you, the word zulu doesn't appear in any of these postings. -John oops
DeleteI'm a big fan of Altered Fates stories though prefer the ones where personality is affected too. The Husband & The Wife are two of my favourites.
DeleteEmma
did you ever read "the experiment"? -John
DeleteThe Altered Fates one? Yeah. I love it apart from the fact that I think a trick was majorly missed by not having similar mental changes affecting the girlfriend on her return.
DeleteI've even toyed with making that request to the writer or offering to do it myself...
Emma
I absolutely agree -John
DeleteActually, imagine a far darker version where the original man was an unsavoury character. When transformed, he causes a swap on his girlfriend but ends up paying the price for it as she takes on more and more of his original nasty traits...
Delete(Sighs happily)
Emma
Would such a man permit a "business trip" -john
DeleteWell there are ways round things like that. I would say that it might be better if he weren't so overtly hostile anyway; just more dominant perhapss. He'd have to be fairly balanced and open-minded to consider the experiment in the first place...
DeleteA control freak? some potential there.
DeleteYeah.
DeleteOn the other hand I wanted the story to have a positive resolution. I'd favour the new boyfriend just settling into his new role and the two of them being happy...
"But that sent a shudder of repulsion through him." revulsion? -John
ReplyDeleteHmmm. Well the definition of "reulsion" suggests extreme aversion so I'm relatively happy. Might change it on the master manuscript though...
ReplyDeleteJust began to read this story recently. And I can't help commenting on this chapter.
ReplyDeleteIt's still hard for me to believe Burt would give up his only way out by his own hands, twice........
This time he even came up with the idea of swapping with someone else. He's so close to the exit, he was totally capable of doing it, and all he needed was just to do it. But he chose otherwise.
I understand you want to emphaize how low he has fallen, that he couldn't resist following orders, and he felt disgusting to become a woman.
But after so much determination (escaping from his job, intruding into the manor, doing everything his was not allowed to) to come this far, he stepped back at the very final moment.......? I think this is not convincing enough.
Hope you don't mind this rather negative comment. Love your stories.
-- Crystal
Hi Crystal,
DeleteWell first of all, thank you for reading up to this point. Lady Ann is a bit of an epic so I must be doing something right for you to have reached this point.
I know what you mean. It is frustrating that Burt gives up this chance after coming so close again. His problem really is that he's been biologically programmed to follow orders and that makes it impossible for him to resist a direct order.
By way of comparison, it's equivalent to sneaking in to the vice president's office of the company he works in to get something that is sort of his. He has just enough gumption to get in there but being caught in the act and told to hand it over... I suspect most of us would do as he did and that is without that programming of his.
So... I see where you're coming from but I actually think it makes sense. I do appreciate feedback though, thanks. Sometimes I agree with it and change things but in this case I think I'll keep it as it is.
Keep the comments coming!
Emma
Sorry, not trying to ask you change anything. If my previous comment sounds harsh, that's not what I meant. Of course this story is great. I will keep on reading. Keep up the good work. :)
Delete-- Crystal