Friday 4 September 2015

LADY ANN'S FOLLY: Chapter Twelve - Part Twelve



After her chastising chat with Richard’s mother, Lillian, Mavis had spent much of the rest of the day exploring the grand old house, Crackshaw, where she hoped to spend the rest of her life.

After their interview, Lillian had dismissed her rudely and Richard, when she found him, had made it clear that he was busy catching up with his business.

The house was even vaster than Mavis’s first impression had supposed. It had two great inner courtyards joined by two archways and several wings leading off from that principle figure-eight pattern. In her wanderings, it became clear to Mavis, that it might take days, or even weeks, to fully appreciate the scale of the place.

She found a library with thousands upon thousands of books with walkways going round the walls on two levels reaching fully three storeys up. At each level there was a little bridge across the centre of the room from one side to the other with spiral stairs at each corner leading up. There was a grand banquet hall with a vast table filling its length and great windows that let the light stream in. There was a chapel within the building that was far larger than Griply church and far more lavishly decorated. There was dining room after dining room, each meant, surely, for subtly different purposes, and an equal number of living rooms.

And all over the house were little servant doors, leading to narrow corridors and screw stairs through which the servants could scurry to do their master’s bidding.

The grounds were equally extensive. Mavis viewed them first from the windows of various rooms and later by actually walking out. She found lavish flowerbeds and an incredible topiary garden. She found fountain after fountain, the largest one of which was built around statues of mighty charging horses. She found an extensive maze that she was afraid to enter for fear of getting lost. There was a croquet lawn and more than one children’s play house. There were stables containing more horses than Burt would ever see in his life, let alone be able to shovel the shit up for.

It was a grander house than Mavis, in her small life and background, had ever heard over. It was grander than she could ever have imagined.

But she had come to understand now that her dream of owning this place was not as straightforward as she had initially thought. At a glance, this life she was busy stealing appeared to be a fairy tale happy ending, but Richard’s ambivalence and obsession with work and his mother’s controlling nature dominated the truth of it. Added to that there was the threat of the real Ann trying to reclaim her body.

That happy ending wasn’t secure but Mavis wanted it to be.

A life like this hadn’t even been on the table throughout her life. Yes, there were challenges now – yes, there were enemies in every direction – but Mavis could see past all that to the prize.

And what a prize!

If she could one day take control of this estate and the money behind it then she would be happy until the end of her days.

But Lillian was clearly not going to allow that to happen; not easily.

Mavis saw her more than once while she wandered the gardens, watching like a vulture from the windows of the house. When it came to their evening meal, Lillian watched her still.

The meal was an awful affair really with an overlong table and far too many servants in attendance. Lillian had sat at one end of the table and Richard the other. Mavis had been seated in the centre. Richard read through paper reports, engrossed, and Lillian only went on staring, eating sepulchrally. Her chilly gaze offered no welcome ; only open hostility.

Mavis kept her own gaze on her food as course after lavish course was brought out. If she did look in Lillian’s direction she gave her an open and friendly smile, refusing to allow herself to be cowed by the miserable old woman.

She had realised something as she walked round, thinking about her old life and the new one stretching out before her. She realised something now, feeling Lillian’s enmity washing over her.

This place was going to be hers; all of it; and Lillian was not going defeat her.






21 comments:

  1. well witten, very good discriptions. WOW Lillian is a real piece of work, They way Mavis fels about her & th epot of gold before her eyes I really want to be the one who insures the old woman's life.
    Of coutrse the magic medlaion might comeinto play somehow.

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    1. Well I'm not sure how it could. The pendant is hundreds of miles away up in Yorkshire.

      Mavis is on her own!

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  2. Such an unfortunate mother son dynamic

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    1. Well the mother and son seem to like it.

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    2. Heh heh. And look how well that turned out!

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    3. they certainly put more...effort into entertaining their guests :)

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  3. if you're going to dream. Dream big

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    1. Mavis never had the chance to realistically dream before. Now she can, watch out!

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    1. Yeah. There aren't many morals or much warmth in that household.

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    2. "After her chastising chat..." You thought of that phrase and you just could not resist using it! I bet you tried really hard not to use it too! ;) Another amazing product from the unflappable Emma Finn.

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    3. Not flapping is what Emmas do best.

      (And I didn't even notice there was anything odd about it)

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  5. whats is going on with the "two" Elizabeth's


    Jessie

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    1. Well believe it or not, we'll be finding out about one of them in the very next episode.

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  6. LOVED this part! The reason is that Mavis' spirit is still shinning through, her background, determination never to go back, and lust for more wealth is a tremendous motivation. The question is, will it be enough? Lillian is probably more intelligent, far more experienced, and holds most of the cards.

    The thing, IMO, that Mavis has and hasn't used up to now, is sex. I supposed Richard is waiting until they get married, like a proper English gentleman, but once they become intimate the passions of the bedroom might be enough to tip the balance of power between the two women . . . or not.

    Thanks for another great chapter, oh, I also loved your exposition in this one, you really painted a nice picture of the estate with your words.

    Cheers
    Zapper

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    1. Thanks. I wanted to set it up well. Crackshaw is going to feature heavily in this and the next book and of course it remains a location in modern day Nockton Vale as well.

      The big question you should be asking yourselves though, is who is living there nowadays?

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  7. do you think the earl envies Richard? Greater wealth, greater influence, a better position to take on the new century etc.

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    1. Perhaps a little but he would never admit it.

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    2. why admit it when you can do something about it!

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