Ann’s face
crumpled as one emotion after another pressed through her at the sight of the
man she had promised her life to.
Richard, for
his part, regarded her coldly, measuring her stance and position alongside who
he thought was his fiancée. For a long moment Ann was lost in the sight of him,
forgetting who she looked like now – who she was – losing herself in the
momentary belief that he saw her as she was meant to be: as Lady Ann. But that
sense was slashed away as his face crinkled into a sneering disdain edged with
fury and even potential violence.
“Well?” he
snapped. “Is this… creature bothering you darling?” His eyes flicked across to
Mavis and Ann flushed at the sound of that affectionate word levelled at
somebody other than her.
She found
her eyes drawn down to her dishevelled attire; her dirty hands; her bulging
bosom; the sense of who she was now curling tighter around her, accompanied by
a shimmer of something at the back of her neck that tickled her brain and drew
her deeper into the moist depravity of the lower class. Then up she looked
again at this impeccably dressed and groomed lord; at the barrenness of his pitiless
expression; and she got a further jolt of acknowledgement of her newfound
status.
“She came
out of the bushes,” replied Mavis, her voice crisp and more well-honed than it
had been a moment ago. There were imperfections still, but subtle ones, easy to
overlook. “Talking ridiculous stories about magical mumbo-jumbo. I was just
telling her to leave me alone.”
“And she
ignored you?” Richard looked from one woman to the other. Ann’s face paled with
alarm.
“Yes. She
refused to withdraw. I was just becoming frightened.” Mavis looked Ann in the
eye and winked, smirking with the side of her mouth that Richard couldn’t see.
Ann shook
her head, flapping her lips, trying to defend herself, but there were no words
that would come. What could she possibly say to free herself from this
developing nightmare.
“You
impudent sow!” snapped Richard, descending the steps toward them, brandishing
his cane. “You filthy little urchin. Be off with you! Get away from here, or
you’ll feel the sharp end of this stick.”
Ann staggered
back, raising her arms in panic. Richard prodded her in the flank and she gave
a yelp of pain and shock, then he prodded her again, forcing her along like an
animal.
“You have no
right, speaking to your betters,” he said. “How dare you approach a lady. Your
very existence is a stain on this county. Look at you. You’re good for nothing;
like all your kind! I wish that the lot of you could be exterminated – all the
lower orders – but then of course we’d have no one to do the labour!” He gave
her a sharp crack of his cane on her buttock and Ann cried out in agony. “Keep
to your own kind, you corpulent sow! Do you hear me! Keep to your own kind!”
Ann started
to run, tears pouring from her eyes, moans of anguish coming from her mouth and
Richard stopped, shaking his cane in the air as if he might continue pursuit at
any moment.
Ann looked
back as she ran and saw the pair watching her as they walked toward the coach.
She saw the mirth and disdain on Mavis’s stolen features and the tears came
ever faster as she fled from the grisly scene.
She ran down
the drive, desperately afraid that Powell or the gardener would see her and see
her locked in the stocks; afraid that Richard would charge her down on
horseback; but no one did see her. No hoof beats pursued her.
In the end
she came to a stop several hundred yards down the lane and just sobbed and
sobbed and sobbed and sobbed, barely able to catch her breath. She remained
there, hands on her knees, pitched forward, in pain from the cane strikes as
much as from the fire in her lungs.
Then the
hoof beats finally came and she looked up in fear to see the coach approaching
rapidly from the direction of the hall. The lane was narrow there – too narrow.
She looked left and right, realised it was going to run her down if she didn’t
move, and hurled herself into the ditch to avoid the crashing horses and
whirling wheels.
The coach
didn’t slow and Ann clambered back onto the road, watching it recede, knowing
what this meant.
Mavis had
said she had the pendant. She was leaving the village. She might not be back
for weeks.
Every day
that passed, Ann would become more and more like the original Mavis until she
lost her original identity entirely – until she craved the life of a peasant
simpleton. There was no escaping that. She’d seen it happen to Burt as he
became so used to his life as a labourer that he refused to go back to his
former riches.
That would
happen to her; she knew it.
This was her
last and only chance to retrieve the pendant and get her life back and she’d
failed. Her life was lost to her forever.
Unless…
She watched
the coach pass round the further bend out of sight.
Unless she
ran after it; caught up to them at the station; tried one last time to convince
Mavis to give her back her life before it really was too late!
In fairness Burt was content Mavis was not so she might not "accept" things
ReplyDeleteYou could be right. But I wouldn't say the original Burt was happy. He was tortured by his love for Lady Ann.
Deleteno but with his life/station so to speak. I can't wait for the intersection of Mavis' cunning and Ann's education as the "pass" each other. (pause for giggle)
DeleteYeah. Mavis is one character that I suspect could be interesting. We'll see though. Other things are coming first.
DeleteHattie is going to have some fun?
DeleteI couldn't possibly coment.
Delete(Read: Yes)
Soon?
DeleteJust writing the scene at the moment. Next chapter?
DeleteRichard is very handy with his cane and shows the new Anne what he thinks of the lower classes . I hope that he learns a valuable lesson in the future
ReplyDeleteRob
someone getting their comeuppance? that doesn't happen in Ms Finn's stories ever! :)
DeleteWhat are you talking about? It doesn't!
DeleteI would say that the opposite generally occurs. Look at the fates of the characters in Rich & Poor, or what happens to Lady Ann in LA1. She's very "happy" at the end of it, even though she starts out as something of an antagonist.
Yeah sarcasm doesn't come across in a post.
DeleteAh...
Delete(Looks bashful)
I knew that.
My fault I should include a warning
DeleteThough I was thinking about this later. I knew you were being sarcastic thinking on. My point was that I really don't tend to subscribe to the comeuppance plan - though I did use the word comeuppance quite a lot during the LA3 outlining process (smirks evilly).
DeleteBut we all know that putting in exciting twists and turns into a story making you wish for more just after what you thought was going to happen but didn't is what Emma's do best
ReplyDeleteRob
Heh heh. Thanks Rob. Though I think a certain amount of predictability has a place in these kind of stories as well to build up the anticipation. I try to mix it up both ways.
DeleteI'm just so glad to have people who give their time to read what I produce. It's a fabulous honour. Thank you all.
we're just glad you keep on publishing.
DeleteNo signs of me stopping yet!
DeleteAnd I finally hit my rhythm on Cleaner last night. I'm on target to finish it in the next couple of weeks and will then publish in November!
(Fingers crossed)
Nice, how far "ahead" are you?
DeleteAbout a chapter and a half I think.
DeleteVery cool for all us impatient types :)
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