This is an ANCIENT story of mine that I've dug out, dusted off, cleaned up a bit... and ENDED at last!
I hope you enjoy it and please give feedback by commenting below. It would be really appreciated.
“What man? I’ve told you not to talk to strange men!”
I hope you enjoy it and please give feedback by commenting below. It would be really appreciated.
I
"Magic doesn't
exist," snapped Margaret, scowling down at Patsy, daring her to answer
back.
"Yes it does!"
"Don't talk back to
me young lady!"
"But it
does!!"
Margaret raised her
finger, demanding silence. "I won't hear another word." She put her
hands on her hips. "Now you get in bed."
Patsy didn't move.
"I won't tell you
again...."
"I can prove it to
you," blurted Patsy suddenly. Her eyes were wide open and a little crazy.
"Don't be
stupid."
"But Mum...."
"Bed!"
Patsy got up off the
carpet. Margaret frowned at the creases that were lined into her daughter's
dress. Patsy was only six and her clothes frequently ended up looking like
she’d been dragged through a hedge backwards.
"If you're so sure
magic doesn't work, why don't you let me make a fool out of myself trying to
prove it does."
"I said bed."
"I'll never say it
works again if I can't prove it right now," said Patsy, "I
promise!"
Margaret was getting
angry. "Alright then. Prove it."
Patsy grinned and ran
over to her wardrobe. The floor was littered with dolls and all their little
outfits. She had to be careful as she moved. Then she took something from
inside the wardrobe and brought it across to her mother.
"Take this in your
hand," said Patsy.
“What is it?”
“A man gave it to me in the
playground yesterday.”
“What man? I’ve told you not to talk to strange men!”
“Just hold it for a
second,” demanded the little girl.
Margaret sighed and did
so. It was a small round stone, almost black, and it was covered in engravings
that Margaret couldn't identify in the light coming from Patsy's bedside lamp.
Patsy was still
grinning. "Now say that you wish you were me."
"Don't be
ridiculous child."
"Come on Mom, you
promised you'd let me prove it."
"Why do I have to
say that?"
"It has to be
something quite big," said Patsy, shaking her hands for emphasis, "if
it works you'll change right back."
"It's not going to
work."
"So say it!"
Margaret looked at the
stone in her palm. Then she closed her fingers over it and looked at Patsy. She
raised one eyebrow to say how ridiculous it was and then she said, "I wish
I were Patsy."
Patsy clapped her hands
and burst out laughing.
Margaret scowled.
"There," she said, "I told you it wouldn't.... work." She
stopped speaking and put her hand to her throat.
That hadn't been her
voice. It had been higher pitched, like a little girl’s. It had been… Patsy's
voice.
"Patsy? What's
going on?" Her voice was all wrong. It sounded exactly like her daughter’s.
She didn't feel so good. Then she looked down and she almost screamed. She was
still tall, far taller than Patsy, but she wasn't wearing her skirt and blouse
anymore, she was wearing Patsy's blue dress, cut short at the sleeves, far too
small for her and barely reaching her mid thigh. Patsy was curling up with
laughter. Margaret stared at her, horrified. "Patsy!! Stop it! Stop what
you're doing!"
"You're going to be
me Mum! You're going to be a little girl!"
"No! I don't want
to be a girl again! No!" She ran across to the mirror. In the reflection
she had Patsy's hair, yellow and curly, spilling down her back. Then she did
scream because in a second she changed again and she was looking up at a mirror
twice as tall as she was, gazing, panic-stricken at the image of a six year old
girl, at the image of her daughter's face that she now wore. "No!"
Patsy carried on
laughing as she approached from behind.
"I'll take that
thank you," she said and snatched the stone.
"Give it
back!"
"I don't think so Patsy'."
"Don't call me
that!"
"That's your name
now," said Patsy, pushing her backwards onto the bed. "You're just
little Patsy'!"
"No!" She
stared down at her fleshy arms and legs bound up in the blue fabric of her
dress. Then she glared at Patsy and grabbed forward. Patsy leapt back and then
they were all over each other. Margaret grabbed hold of Patsy's dress and they
hit the door, knocking it closed and crashed to the floor. They rolled, one
girl scratching the other, over and over until one of them grabbed hold of the
stone where it had fallen and pulled herself to her feet.
The other one stood up.
"Now no-one can tell which of us is which," she said, "who's to
say you aren't the real Patsy now?"
"I'm not."
"Neither am I. I'm
Margaret." The original Patsy smirked at her joke.
"No you
aren't!" She brandished the stone. "This is only a nightmare but it's
over now. I wish I were Margaret again!"
Nothing happened. Patsy
started laughing. "Only one wish per person," she said.
"Then you wish me
back to normal." She thrust out the stone. "Right now young
lady!"
Patsy laughed and took
the stone. She turned round and walked slowly over to the window. Margaret
watched her, eyes wide and frightened. The orange light from the street light
outside illuminated Patsy's cheek. Then she seemed to smile to herself and
without turning round, she said, "What if I were to wish for something
else and not change you back...."
"You wouldn't dare!
Change me back now!"
"What if I were to
wish I were the mother instead."
"No! You can’t!!"
She screamed the words out. Everything seemed so big and out of control.
"Yes I can. And I’m
going to. There’s nothing you can do to stop me." She lifted the stone.
"NO!"
"I wish I were
Margaret," said Patsy and she turned, looked back and smiled. As she did
so her hair darkened and seemed to wither until it was only a bob, smooth, dark
and silky, dropping down to just below her ears.
Margaret was going to
start crying.
Patsy’s hair was only
the beginning. Her little dress grew and extended, stretching down below her
knees. The sleeves dropped down over her elbows. In a second it wasn't a dress
anymore, but a blouse and skirt. Margaret's blouse and skirt. She laughed, but
it sounded horrible, far deeper than it should have been. It sounded like a
grown woman's laugh; like Margaret's laugh.
And then in a quiet rush
she shot up, growing until she was nearly twice as tall as Patsy. Her face
changed as she grew, becoming narrower, the cheek bones pushing out until her face
became long and oval, until she had become Margaret entirely.
She continued to laugh,
looking down at herself, testing her weight and balance on her high heels. Her
laughter slowly died then she looked at the new “Patsy” and it came back. She
staggered backwards, one hand pointing straight at the little girl in front of
her, the other rested on the base of her neck in a gesture the old Margaret had
often used.
"I don't know what
you're staring at young lady," she snapped suddenly.
"What have you done!?!"
screamed “Patsy,” staring, petrified at the woman in front of her. "How
could you do this?"
"Don't question me
young lady," said “Margaret” with a smirk, "or you'll get a
smack."
The new Patsy ran over
to the woman who had been her daughter only minutes earlier, tears starting to
rise to the sides of her eyes. "Change me back! Please!! I'm sorry about
everything I've done to you. I'll never smack you or send you to bed early
again!"
"I know you
won't," sneered Margaret, "it's you who'll get smacks now and you're
coming dangerously close to one now."
"No!" All
reality was crashing down around Patsy's ears.
This couldn’t be true –
none of it could be. But it was.
She had really become
her daughter and it looked like she was going to be stuck in this nightmare for
the rest of her life!
II
‘Patsy’ walked into the bathroom, frightened tears quaking at the
edges of her eyes.
She wasn’t trying to walk slowly but there was something wrong with
her legs. They were too short now. She wasn’t making the progress she was
expecting and it infuriated her. She burst into several steps of running but
slowed again to a walk because if anything, running in this body emphasised
what had happened to her.
The bathroom doorway towered over her. Everything did. She’d seen
the world like this before but as she’d grown up, her perceptions had changed,
subtly overlaying her memories so that now, seeing it again from this
perspective was obscenely jarring. The sink, the bath, the walls: it was all
different. The same, but different.
She stopped in front of the sink. From her new perspective, she
couldn’t see into the sink anymore. She put her hands on the smooth ceramic
edge but almost let the tears flow when she saw the soft forearms and pudgy
fingers emerging from the short blue sleeves of her dress. She lifted them
again, backs of her hands facing her and just stared at them. Then she turned
them over and looked at her palms.
She’d seen these hands a million times before but never from this
side. They had never been hers. Now they were.
She put them together, touched the fingers of one with the fingers
of the other. Then she looked into the mirror over the sink.
She was Patsy.
She knew it was true. She knew when she saw herself in her
daughter’s dressing table mirror during the change, that it was true, but the
shock was gone now. She still felt shaken, everything had a surreal quality –
but seeing herself as she now was – no longer mingled with disbelief and
surprise – was something else.
Her head barely showed at the foot of the mirror. There were bottles
of hand lotion and vertical free-standing tubes of toothpaste blocking her
view. She strained to reach across the girth of the sink to push them away but
she couldn’t do it and retain control of them. Several items clattered down
into the sink. She cursed but shut her lips over the last syllable. She didn’t
want to hear her words come out in that voice.
The mirror was clear now and she looked at herself. Only the upper
half of her head was visible. The hair was yellow and curly, an Alice band
keeping her forehead clear. The eyes were big and frightened. She stood on
tiptoe and the rest of her face came into view. Round cheeks, huge moist eyes,
quivering lips.
It was her daughter’s face. It was Patsy’s. But now, undeniably,
horrifyingly, it was hers.
She looked down at hers fingers again and then brought them up to
touch her cheek, meeting her eyes in the mirror. She was Patsy.
The tears finally broke free of her eyes and rolled down her cheeks.
She couldn’t make a sound, she didn’t want to, but the sounds started to come.
A tight whimper grew in her throat. It turned into a cough and then broke out
into a full blown sobbing.
Patsy turned away from the mirror and ran to the doorway. The landing
was in darkness. She crashed against the doorway, holding onto it for support
and cried and cried.
None of this was possible. She couldn’t change places with her
daughter.
But she had.
She had.
And there was no going back.
III
“She’s crying again,” said the man who would be known to her now
only as Frank. He didn’t look up from the TV Times. “Are you going to check on
her or shall I?”
‘Margaret’ stood in the doorway of the lounge, her arms folded, legs
crossed at the ankle. She smiled sardonically, raising her eyebrow. “I think
you’d better go,” she said, “I think it was me that upset her.”
Frank stood and started to lumber toward the door. He didn’t make
eye contact and she watched him move. This wasn’t her father anymore. It was
her husband.
He was bulky but he wasn’t taller than her. She had always idolised
him, but now she wasn’t a child anymore, she saw him in a different light: his
stocky body, his bald head, his bushy moustache. This was the man she was going
to spend the rest of her days with as an equal.
She took his wrist in
her hand as he started to pass and brought him closer, then kissed him on the
lips, feeling strange stirrings that nevertheless seemed familiar in this body.
It felt so good to feel his big masculine hands wrap round her slim body to
feel both protected, honoured and seen as a sexual creature.
That was when she
realised how complete the transformation had been. She hadn’t wished that she
looked like her mother. She had wished to be
her mother. She had become Margaret completely in both body and mind. A quick
mental inventory confirmed it. She knew things she couldn’t have done as a
little girl. She knew how to do her job; how to drive; how to cook and clean
and read and write perfectly… how to pleasure her husband.
It made her smile
lasciviously and she whispered, “Hurry up and put Patsy to bed then get back
down here. I want to feel that big cock of yours. I want to take it in my mouth
and make my man happy.”
Frank grinned. “With an
offer like that, she better not give me any trouble or she’ll get some back.”
The new Margaret watched
him go with her arms folded under her new breasts, grinning to herself. She
wondered if her new daughter had realised yet that she’d lost her adult mind;
that she was trapped entirely in the life of a little bitty girl.
IV
The new Patsy heard the heavy footfalls of her former husband as he
came up the stairs and felt both relief and panic.
Relief because surely he would help her now but panic because she
knew how angry he could get if his “daughter” stayed up past her bedtime.
She ran from the bathroom as fast as her stunted legs could carry
her but she wasn’t fast enough. He caught her at the top of the stairs and
swung her up off her feet, completely out of her control. She squealed,
frightened as he carried her back to what was now her room.
“I’ve told you about this before, haven’t I Patsy!?”
“Wait! Stop!”
“Get in there!” He threw her down on the bed where her tiny form
bounced. “What the hell are you doing up and out of bed?! Eh?”
“I’m sorry! I’m sorry but I need to talk to you!”
“Talk to me? You can talk to my hand!”
He snatched her up and ripped down her little panties, throwing her
dress up and out of the way. She knew exactly what was coming but she couldn’t
quite believe it. Then his hand struck as he walloped her as hard as he could.
Over and over he struck her bottom , smacking her until she was weeping
uncontrollably. Then he lifted her again and threw her back down where she
crumpled to the floor, sobbing.
“There. Happy now? Or do you want to stay up even later?”
As she wept, her little hands up to cover her face, Patsy kept her
mouth shut, terrified to say anything. Frank had been a loving husband but he
was a brutally strict father and always had been. The beating she’d just
received was nothing compared to what he was capable of.
Then she spotted something on the dressing table that made her heart
rekindle suddenly.
“Please wait,” she said, hating the sound of her little girl voice.
“Listen to me.”
“Listen to what? Hurry it up. Your mother’s got something waiting
for me downstairs.”
“Just pick up that stone on the dresser,” said Patsy desperately.
“What, this?” He took it in his hand.
“Yes.” She nodded threw her tears, hating her tiny whimpering
childish voice. “Now please believe me when I tell you something. Please just
listen. Frank. I’m not Patsy. I’m your wife, Margaret.”
“Margaret?”
“Please just listen.” She went on. “Patsy did this to me. With that
stone. She tricked me into wishing to be her then made a wish that she could be
me.” She whimpered again, tears running down her round cheeks. It only works
once for each person but you could wish us back. You could put it all right.
Please. Believe me and just say that you wished Patsy and Margaret were back in
their real bodies.”
Frank looked at, his face blank. Then he said, “I’ll make a wish for
you.” He sneered. “I wish you’d keep your mouth shut about swapping bodies and put
your effort into just being a good little girl for a change.”
Patsy’s eyes gaped open with panic as she heard the words and for a
split second she saw the stone glow in her new father’s big hand. Then he
walked to the doorway and held it up. “This is going in the trash. I don’t want
to hear another peep from you tonight. And don’t come downstairs. Your mother
and I are going to be… busy.”
He went out, slamming the door and Patsy climbed onto the bed, still
weeping.
That was it. There was no way out of it and with his careless wish
she couldn’t now ever even tell anyone what had happened. She was compelled to
go on acting like the little girl she’d become!
She got into her tiny cotton nightie and crawled under the covers,
only now realizing that her mind was becoming more and more childish. She
couldn’t remember how to do her job anymore or how to drive a car but looking
at the dollies on the floor she realised she knew all their names.
This was her life now. She was trapped in it.
She was going to be Patsy until the end of her days.
Oh how she wished she had never picked up that stone!
But she had. And now her life was ruined!
She had always been terribly strict on her daughter, taking her own
frustrations out on her and now that was going to come back on her in spades!
Seems like the new Patsy got the better side of the deal once she calms down - she's two decades younger and will age back to an adult, eventually. Depends on whether the new Margaret decides to go to work and keep paying the bills or she keeps some of the childish mindset and loses her job, causing them to fall into poverty (and a ticket to Barton).
ReplyDeleteHey, Thanks for the feedback! You're the fist person who has commented!
DeleteYeah. I did start to think that myself. The new Patsy has probably got the best end of the deal long term but between now and then I suspect both parents are going to make her life a living hell.
(I've just tweaked the ending slightly to press that point)
I like the Barton reference. Heh heh. I wondered if anyone had noticed that that location keeps coming back up...
I forget that story !
ReplyDeleteIt's your second ar story with Emma (one of my favorite AR story of all time)
This one is great but bit disapointed. In lot of your story, the transformationis always wanted and it's after that's become complicated... ;)
Hey Aiko. Sorry to disappoint. This was actually the first AR story I wrote. Stuck came a lot later.
DeleteI have a mix of forced and chosen transformations and I like both for different reasons, though like you, I probably prefer the latter.
Emma
ReplyDeleteThank you replying to my comments on one of your other stories from another site with your link attached
I would not now have the joy and pleasure of reading more of your work
Well reap what you sow comes to mind when reading this story and the new patsy has her youth back with all that entails
Pity she is forgetting her adult life as it would be possible to be an improved person to learn the mistakes made the first time
Thank
Samantha
Hi Samantha,
DeleteThank you very much indeed!
Patsy may be forgetting the details of her adult life and how to drive, etc, but she still knows who she is and she'll always feel the pinch of of her loss of status and control. But yes, she also has another chance at life so maybe she got the better end of the deal.
Emma
Hey Emma.
Deletegreat story, very gripping. I'm not sure that Patsy does get the better deal with a Dad like that, he scared the hell out of me never mind a six year old. It's a pretty brutal story for Patsy. Plus her new Mummy who's more concerned with getting laid than with her daughter crying on the landing.
she brings it on herself though by humouring her daughter in the first place, then using up her last get-out clause by telling the Dad about the stone. It does remind me of Stuck of course, equally page turning and equally horrifying. The pace is brilliant btw. Any plans to expand this one? I think it could go places.
Dandelion
Ps. What's A
....AR?
ReplyDeleteThanks Dandelion. You're chewing your way through the archive. I wonder if you'll like my non-transformation stories as much if you get round to them in the end.
DeleteThis was one of my very first stories where I was just testing the water and getting out some quick and dirty concepts. It remained unfinished for YEARS. It's still quite rough around the edges.
Yeah, there are similarities to Stuck. Because I like that feeling of terrible mistakes and being trapped coupled with loss of status and frailty there's bound to be. I've been strongly considering doing some more AR stories as people seem to like them.
And AR...? Age Regression. It's a very popular sub-genre of transformation stories with entire sites dedicated to it.
Thanks! Guess I'm a bit new to it all so thanks for your patience in explaining stuff. This story is great but yes, quite rough as you say.
ReplyDeleteon non transformation stories... Well, guess I might like it but I have to admit to being a bit of a transformation junkie at the moment. I really did think about this stuff my whole life and thought it was just me being weird :) so, it's nice to have a gifted storyteller to bring it to life for me. I really love the genre. Promise not to bug you with questions on every post or anything but I'm loving this blog so, so much that I wanted to read back and find out what came before. Hope you don't mind
Nice dandelion picture.
DeleteYeah. I know what you mean. I always liked the idea of it. When I first found the Transformation Story Archive and Fictionmania I was like a kid in a sweet shop.with five hundred pounds in change.
Please do continue to bug me with questions. Getting reader comments is literally the best part of my day.
Aw that's really nice to hear. Love asking you questions, reading your writing is kind of the best part of my day as well. :)
ReplyDeleteoh and yes... Kid in a sweet shop.. Now what does that remind me of that I read about recently??
Heh heh. So what are you going to read next? I recommend One Thing Different.
DeleteK. I'll be on that then :)
ReplyDeleteI think you'll like it. And Talons of the Hawk is out on Sunday!
DeleteGreat I can't wait to read it. Can't promise you a reader for Sunday I got guests sun to weds but after that I'll be on it like a tramp on chips :)
DeleteOh good. I like a good tramp.
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