Sorry. No Cleaner today. No time to write!
It was Burt getting up that woke Ann
from her sleep in her little bare wooden room above the inn. She groaned and he
glanced back at her as he put his shirt on.
“Oh, sorry luv,” he said. “I didn’t
mean t’wake ye. I ave to get oop t’t’hall to get workin or Arry’ll gimme an
earful.”
It took a moment for Ann to get her
bearings, then she remembered where she was; and who she was. Her heart sank
through the bed. Still the penniless innkeeper’s daughter with no prospects to
speak of. She hated every aspect of her new life… except one.
“Do ye ave to go?” she asked
plaintively, her voice nasal and abrasive. Hearing it made her feel even more
down. The clodhopper accent was settling in even further now and it had come
unbidden without her even needing to consider it. How quickly and how low she
had fallen.
“Aye,” replied Burt. “Unless I wants
a balling out from old Harry.” He paused though and considered. “I’ve probably
got time for a quick suck though if you wants to give me one.” He grinned,
presenting his crotch, and Ann looked at the slowly rising penis proudly on
display.
Her face fell… but there was
something… tempting about it.
Burt could see her indecision so he
grinned, oscillating his pelvis so that his cock waggled from side to side.
“Come on luv,” he said. “You’ll miss yer chance if you ain’t quick.”
Ann grinned and clambered off the
bed onto the floor at his feet, grabbing his hairy calf with one hand and the
shaft of his cock with the other. She was still smiling in anticipation but as
she went to close her mouth around it she looked up at Burt’s face, his body in
extreme perspective. He was looking fondly down at her which made her feel warm
and happy but the reek of horse dung and sweat was hovering about him. His
clothes were filthy and he hadn’t washed since the night before. Her own juices
had dried crustily onto his penis.
For a second she had been caught in
the spirit of sexual adventure but now the dirty reality of this most sordid
activity was brought home to her. Now she saw herself from the outside as a
working class slut about to pleasure her working class man before he set off to
his labouring job.
The reality that this was the
highlight of her new life struck her between the eyes. This unclean act of
debauchery was literally the best thing going for her now amid a life of
poverty and hard work.
“Well come on then Mavis,” said
Burt. “Put it in. Show us what yer made of.” He chuckled.
Ann looked at the end of the pulsing
fleshy thing and asked herself if she had a choice. She could say no but what
then? Burt would leave her alone and for a few hours she’d lie here feeling
lonely, probably wishing she’d gone through with it.
The real Mavis had taken her body
hundreds of miles away to the south. Surely she should be planning how to get
down there and force a trade back, but it seemed an impossible task and she was
sure that Hattie still had the pendant anyway.
“I’m gonna have ta go,” said Burt.
“I’m gonna be late.”
“Wait,” said Ann.
He stopped and revolved back to face
her, his cock swinging into the space in front of her face.
Ann looked up at him soulfully.
“Tell me you like me Burt,” she said.
He smiled. “Course I bloody do.”
“Tell me you’ll look after me.”
He crackled a grin, his eyes filled
with warmth. “I’ll look after you always.”
Ann felt a heat relight in her
chest; a glimmer of contentment amid terrible stress.
“Of course I will,” he said. “You’re
my girl, Mavis.”
The smile fell away from Ann’s mouth
and she looked again at Burt’s cock.
That’s who I am now, she thought to
herself. I’m Mavis. Burt’s lass. Nothing more than that.
She took the end of his penis into
her mouth, distorting her lips in a circle around it and sucking the end,
playing with the sensitive end under her tongue.
“Oh yes luv. Yes, I like that.”
A tear came to each of Ann’s eyes
but she shut them tightly, raising her hands to stimulate Burt’s scrotum and
tickle his thigh.
“Oooh yes luv. Yes. You can do that
whenever you like.”
And Ann took to it with greater
enthusiasm, enjoying the compliment and feeling that in this way at least she
could still be a special person. She worked Burt’s cock hard, scratching the
back of his legs and his buttocks and working down the flank of his organ to
lick at his ball sack as he moaned in increasing pleasure. She tried to build
him up, eager to have him cum; desperate to taste his seed; but she could sense
his tension; his fear of being late.
Ignoring that, Ann worked harder
,doing her best to debase herself before this peasant; to do everything in her
power to stimulate him; but eventually and reluctantly, Burt had to pull away.
“I’m sorry luv; really; but I got to
go or I’ll lose me job.”
He pulled his cock from her mouth
and Ann moved after it, keeping hold of it in her lips for as long as she
could. She looked after it longingly as Burt put his trousers and boots on,
wishing she could do it again.
She just wanted to feel loved… and
needed. She wanted that more than everything.
She’d thrown away a promising
marriage to a prosperous titled gentleman for this and she was desperate to
cling onto some tiny glimmer of happiness within the terrible scourge of her
life.
But Burt was going to the door. He
was leaving.
He winked and waved goodbye before
he disappeared, but Ann went on kneeling there naked, wishing only that he
would come back and she could go on pleasuring him until he came in her mouth.
Je suis desole - sorry just been watching 'Spiral' on the BBC iPlayer and trying not to read the English sub-titles :) I hadn't realised you so on the edge with 'Cleaner' it seems so well thought through. I am steeped in admiration.
ReplyDeleteThis is a particularly raunchy posting of Lady Anne. Of the original Lady Anne, Burt and Mavis I've lost track of who is where but I get the feeling new Burt was Anne and new Mavis was Burt (via Anne) which leaves the original Mavis as Anne, away with her fiancee. We need a diagram, Ms Finn.
Despite your failings this evening, thanks for your wonderful efforts.
Robyn H
You are correct
DeleteYeah. I'm planning to have a page that keeps track of who is who. Maybe it's time to do it!
Deletedoes it matter?
Delete(Giggle)
DeleteI'm currently calling people by the name they go by inside their minds so maybe not, but I'll do it anyway. When I get round to it.
There's something awesome about reaching the point when you are rejected from finishing a blowjob. I almost feel bad for Ann...almost.
ReplyDeleteYeah. I like this scene as it's very indicative of how she now sees herself and her desperation for comfort.
Deleteshe didn't even notice that she was "practiced" at it, given that this is her first time.
DeleteOh yeah! Well they do take on the person's "education" by the second day.
DeleteHeh heh heh.
yeah it reminds me of "Burt's" reluctance to turn back when he thinks of all the things he would have to give up, forgetting that he literally won't miss any of them.
DeleteThe insidious but delightful luring mire...
Deleteburt/anne /mavis seems desperate to be loved and the need to be needed seems to be building up in her .as always well written miss finn and please don't burn yourself out trying to get chapters out remember its quality over quantity and you always give quality.
ReplyDeleteRob
Yeah. Thanks.
DeleteIt doesn't help that I'm a bit undecided on the next turn to Cleaner's story...
take a break. have a coffee/drink/minibreak whatever. when you are centered again, you'll know how to proceed.
ReplyDeleteI guess. For a change of pace I'm actually working on my conventional novel, Stopping Hitler, coming to an Amazon near you (hopefully) soon.
DeleteI agree with John . Find your center get yourself balanced and everything will fall into place.
DeleteRob
Thanks Rob!
DeleteWHAT? Finn does time travel/alternate history?...AWESOME!
DeleteFraid not. It's an historical political thriller about the men who tried to stop Hitler taking control. It's good though.
Deletedifferent though equally AWESOME!.
Delete(Grins)
DeleteI hope so. I need to write it first!