Nellie had
not consciously felt the changes that ran through her form, changing her from a
simple domestic servant to a titled lady. Unlike Hattie, she hadn’t stood
watching her own reflection transform into someone else’s shape.
She had
known that something unnatural was happening to her and the knowledge of that
had shoved back into the forefront of her mind that promise (or threat) that
Lady Harriet had made: that they would exchange shapes. That realisation of
combined memory and magical sensation was so earthshaking that she had only
stood rigid as the changes overcame her, darkening and curling her hair,
filling out her bosom and her hips, slimming her belly and making her homely
face beautiful as her nose became slim and pert, her lips growing fuller, her
eyes round and mesmerising, her skin seamless.
It was the
jolt as the physical transformation ended that brought her back to her sense,
though of course the process wasn’t over by a long way, even if it seemed to
be. For both women, other changes would now continue invisibly; alterations to
their inner terrain as the education and modes of speech were transformed also,
followed by the likes and dislikes, their identification within the societal
structure, their sense of self, their intelligence, the name they thought as
their own, a lifetime of someone else’s memories. Nellie would very slowly
start now to become Lady Harriet in every internal aspect: cool and aloof;
faintly arrogant and mischievous, manipulative and devious.
Hattie, for
her own part, had already begun the opposite transformation within her mind,
perhaps more quickly than she suspected she would, though she knew it was
coming. How long would it be before she spoke with common inflexion and
started, by instinct, to know her place near the bottom of the servile
hierarchy? How long before she came to accept as undeniable her status as a
lady’s maid?
But for now,
this wasn’t important to either girl.
Nellie
looked down at herself – she looked up at Hattie across the room – and she knew
that what had happened had happened. The unbelievable story that the lady had
told her had come true.
She felt
fear – of course she did – it was an abomination, surely, against the will of
God – but this was swept aside at once by a blossoming marvel and joy.
“I can’t
believe it,” she said, stopping the moment she heard her new exuberant voice to
touch her chest. “Is this... Is this really true?”
Hattie
nodded soberly, “Yes. Yes it is.” She had her arms out straight in front of
her, turning them to look down the skinny backs. She wasn’t experiencing
anywhere close to the excitement she had expected. It was more like...
presentiment... and dread.
“I never
thought something like this would happen to me,” said Nellie, examining herself
within the framework of her luxurious new clothes. “I’ve really turned into a
lady. I’m Lady Harriet. Oh!” As she said the name her eyes glazed and she
reached for the back of her neck. “Did you just feel something...? Hmmm. How
odd.” She shrugged it away.
Hattie
ignored her, looking again at her plain reflection, each moment of viewing
taking her closer to fully comprehending the enormity of her predicament. She
thought of her sister at the back door of the hall and her command to have the
servants snatch the pendant off her, trapping her temporarily in that life.
The same
thing could happen to Hattie now, at any second. And she was the only one who
could set everything back how it was meant to be. If she became trapped as a
maid then Ann would be trapped too. Forever.
She had to
move quickly. Very quickly.
She closed
up the pendant back in its box and locked the lid, putting key and box in the
pocket of her maid’s pinny.
“Right,” she
said.
“Hmmm?”
Nellie turned her head to face her and raised an eyebrow, giving Hattie a shudder
of anxiety. With that face; in that body; in those clothes; Nellie looked
worryingly realistic already. It undermined Hattie’s own self-confidence;
really the only thing that was maintaining her self-image as a titled lady
within her new guise. That look diminished her, even as it raised up the
oblivious maid.
“Let me tell
you my plan,” said Hattie, as confidently as she could. “You have very specific
instructions that you need to follow.”
A knock came
at the door.
Both women
looked at the doorknob and then back at each other.
Nellie’s
face was full of confusion, Hattie’s with panic. She couldn’t think what to do.
Was it best for them to remain silent? Or what that simply prompt whoever it
was to enter unmolested?
“Come in,”
said Nellie.
Hattie glared
at her sharply. Nellie looked back with innocent befuddlement and shrugged.
The door
swung in and in the doorway stood Powell, the butler, serene as usual, but
bearing a caste that Hattie now recognised as superiority to her new station.
“Excuse me
my lady,” he said, addressing Nellie of course. “The Earl and Countess asked me
to mention that they were retiring for the evening along with your aunt and
uncle.”
He waited.
The extended pause became uncomfortable. Even Powell seemed consternated.
“Uh, thank
you,” replied Nellie.
Powell gave
a little bow of his head and a curt smile then glanced at Hattie. “Will that be
all miss?” he asked.
“Er, yes.
Thank you,” said Nellie.
“Very well
my lady. Goodnight.” He stepped back and looked once again at Hattie. “Well
come along girl. Don’t dawdle.”
Hattie gaped
at him and then at Nellie, willing the former maid to ask her to stay.
She didn’t.
There seemed no guile or intent there; just a blasé innocence. Nellie had no
idea that was what Hattie wanted.
“Nellie,”
said Powell firmly. “Come along.”
Hattie
looked again from one to the other and realised, as Burt and Ann had before
her, that she had no choice.
She reminded
herself that this still worked toward her plan. That leaving the room and
pretending to be Nellie, at least for a short time, was part of her scheme; but
she also knew how little power she had during this moment and that made her
understand even more fully how desperate her situation was.
She had to
move on to the next phase as soon as she possibly could; before something awful
and irreversible happened.
Before it
was all far too late to get her life back.
She looked
fearfully one more time at both Powell and her doppelganger, then she followed
his instructions and hurried out the room, to all appearances a common maid.
so it begins
ReplyDelete(Evil laughter)
DeleteThis is going to be deliciously tempting for the new Hattie just as the new nellie us beginning to learn her new station in life
ReplyDeleteRob
oh the options are many, but I think Hattie is going to have some time yet. Nellie is still adjusting, which means more can benefit from Hattie's touch.
DeleteYes. I suspect things are going to get a tad more complicated before they start to straighten themselves out... if they ever do.
Deleteit works for the scene, but I am wondering would Powell presume to "take" Nellie with him without first asking Hattie? Given her mercurial reputation wouldn't the better part of valor be for him to wait for Hattie to send Nellie on her way?
ReplyDeleteYeah... I was thinking the same thing.
Delete*giggles* I am getting the theme tune of the magic roundabout my mind... Love it! Mike W
ReplyDelete(Tries to imagine a bodyswap episode)
Delete"Time for bed" said Zebedee - Boiiing!!
DeleteRobyn H
Heh heh.
DeleteBut there's a lot more to happen before our heroes fianlly put their heads down for the night. You'll see.
Hattie didn't get a chance to tell Nellie to stay quiet. Do you think she'll tell someone?
ReplyDeleteWell I was once told that in fiction you should make things progressively worse and worse for the characters, so possibly.
Delete... or not.