THE ORIGINAL MELISSA
I spent most of the afternoon
relishing the wealth and privilege I now possessed, lounging by the pool in an
expensive swimsuit I bought in the hotel shop.
It was wonderful to say the least. I had never been any
further abroad than France and that had been on a particularly dull and wet
school trip. Robert had never had the money nor inclination to finance
something in a hot country and we could never in a million years have managed
such a lavish hotel as this.
The drinks were complimentary and I got a mite tipsy,
reading another purchase from the hotel shop: a racy little book about a gypsy
falling in love with a wealthy merchant, only to find he was really only
another gypsy in disguise. I couldn’t stop smiling.
When I got very hot I went for a dip in the pool. I wasn’t a
great swimmer - my body wasn’t especially buoyant – but I managed to get across
and back before I got out. That was enough for one day. I knew it was possible
to pull all sorts of muscles if one went too far.
I also knew an excuse when I saw it and I grumbled to myself
as I returned to my recliner because I had given myself the mission to do
better; to get slim; and I was determined not to allow my normal proclivities
limit that. This was the new me now – I was a new Dahlia – and one of the
qualities I was going to possess wholeheartedly was an uncompromising resolve
to achieve my ends.
I lay there for ten more minutes, thinking about the notice
board I’d seen in reception advertising personal trainers, then I gathered my
things and went inside.
I checked the poster and then went to the receptionist.
“Hi. I’d like to hire a personal trainer to work with me
while I’m staying here,” I said.
The receptionist tried to maintain her demeanour but I caught
the smirk that slid quickly on and off her lips. I narrowed my eyes, my initial
impulse goading me to demand an apology, but I managed to retain my decorum.
She gave me some more details and took my information,
telling me she’d set one up for the next morning. We agreed on a time and I
walked away, feeling as though I’d made a terrible mistake.
It was fine. I could always drop out if I didn’t like it and
what if he really could work some magic?
I imagined a scenario where I got bullied and harassed all
day, every day, by the trainer but where I quickly showed results and in no
time had a beautiful athletic body.
It would be so wonderful to do that and maybe, just maybe,
it was possible. It was unlikely, surely, but it was like buying a lottery
ticket. You know the chances are miniscule but that doesn't stop you hoping and
dreaming.
I returned to my sun lounger but I felt better now; more
virtuous. It was true that procrastinating only leads to self-imposed pressure
and stress. Getting things done was the real path to lasting happiness.
I got settled and thought about Dahlia, giggling to myself
about the trick I’d played on her. It had been expensive to convince the hotel
to take her on as a cleaner without meeting her first when I’d found and
responded to their advertisement, but money greases all sorts of wheels if
there’s enough of it. Once it was explained to them that she had previous
experience and they understood just what I was willing to pay so they would
give her a chance, fleshing out the details was simple and very enjoyable.
Had they told her right away when she got there or had she sauntered
round thinking she was a guest? Had she had her rude awakening yet? It was hilarious
to imagine all the possibilities.
Just wait until she learned what it was like to work a real job
– not pretending anymore but stuck in it all day long; at least twice the length
of time she had played at it back in Nockton Vale.
Of course there was a risk she’d hate it and coming crying to
me to swap back, but I had a feeling she was a big enough glutton for punishment
to want to push through with it regardless. Maybe she was angry with herself for
screwing up her modelling career. Maybe she hated herself for her brother’s death.
Whatever it was I could see a vein of self-destruction in her; a desire to pay penance
for some real or imagined act on her part.
Maybe when this was all done with she would have worked that
guilt, whatever it was, out of her system and go on being a happier person. But
she was going to be a fat happier person if I had my way. When this ended and we
swapped back, the very least I wanted to get out of it was a fit slim body and to
be able to laugh at the ruin she’d made of hers.
Wow. This is definitely shaping up Emma. I so can't wait for it. I really need about 5 of these a week lol.
ReplyDeleteI do believe the trainer can help but I think the surgeon can do better lol. Especially if Melissa's husband wants to come visit for a weekend. Have to make sure they BOTH look the parts right? Perhaps to make sure the new Melissa keeps playing the part she should go home before the new Dahlia. Spend a couple weeks taking care of the hubby. Lol.
Oh my head swims with the possibilities. Please let us peak back in soon.
Hi Heather, Thanks for the comment. I will let you peak again soon, don't worry. It'll be nice to see what Dahlia's up to...
DeleteOnly 5 a week? I'd like 7 ... at least :)
DeleteI wonder what 'Dahlia' said to convince the manager that 'Melissa' would make a good cleaner. I'm looking forward to the time when 'Melissa' is reallocated to clean at the 5* palace of luxury. I hope she will.
This is all quite a deviation from Cleaner v1.0 when the personal trainer was the former Dahlia and IIRC surgery was involved, too. I think this is more persuasive and realistic - hence better.
Really ejoying this.
Robyn H
Yeah it has naturally deviated. There will be differences from the original but we will have explored all the original's themes by the time we get to the end. As I've said before, the story is going where it may at the moment. Who am I to dare presume I can guide it?
DeleteThe Melissa plan.... We'll see one of those videos out before we know it. I have personal experience of losing almost three stone in 3 months. That was down to 1) leaving home and cooking for myself 2) drinking too much and then feeling awful the next day 3) walking everywhere.
ReplyDeleteI never forget the look on my mother's face when I went home!
MikeW
Heh heh. Well done! It's ambiguous just how much Melissa needs to lose here, but yeah, I too have lost quite a lot of weight in a relatively short span of time just through increased exercise and decreased food. And Melissa has all the time (and money) in the world to throw at it to get quick results.
DeleteThe most dangerous and vulnerable point comes when you let yourself believe. good luck Melissa or should I say new Dahlia.
ReplyDeleteYeah. Dahlia may be the principle character but Melissa has her own complexities.
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