tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post7810645152713834980..comments2023-10-26T09:25:58.049+01:00Comments on Emma Finn's Dark Tales of Transformation: CLEANER II: Chapter Five - Part Three Emma Finnhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02026867289162806363noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-18641114601767956362015-09-05T16:40:30.511+01:002015-09-05T16:40:30.511+01:00LOL its dangerous too study madness, you might ge...LOL its dangerous too study madness, you might get too close & ecome mad yourself. I know a shrink who reluctanty says that half of those in their profession are nuts eotten2001https://www.blogger.com/profile/15037344663933155088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-18359286014169181472015-09-05T16:10:19.094+01:002015-09-05T16:10:19.094+01:00Thanks Eric. It is interesting trying to get insid...Thanks Eric. It is interesting trying to get inside Dahlia's head, but be careful! If you delve too deeply you may get stuck there and find yourself living her life for real! Emma Finnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02026867289162806363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-61539857589079862802015-09-05T16:02:53.972+01:002015-09-05T16:02:53.972+01:00I'll take your word for the eye operation of c...I'll take your word for the eye operation of course as its your story! LOL!<br />More 'cheeky' observations. One of the many reasons for its fasicnationecept for the obvious<br />M motivations are of course clear enought, envy, hatred, greed, even vengence.<br />D's remain to some extent ( perhaps fortunateely ) a deep mystery known only to D & your very devious mind. Some guesses ( only guess's) that D somehow feel tremendous guilt & feels she should be punished. Maybe she feels gulilt about the death of her parents, also losing their susport undrcut her sense of securiey, then D may feel guitly about what she may feel is her underved success in life, unfair it is that she should have so much & be worship for only her physical looks, ever since she was a kid, who is she really? Whom people see or the lowly unworthy person she feels she is? & of course the guilt on the neglect of her brother. She wasn't even there when he had his operation. Maybe this is part of the reason she feels she should be punished & humliated. Perhps one day we will find out? Perhaps not.<br /> Some speculations on the fasinations of your story. First of all a Prince & Paumpr type plot is always popular, more important is the power & skill of your writing to make the unbelievable believable. Hats off to you, <br />eotten2001https://www.blogger.com/profile/15037344663933155088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-36273434726114324942015-09-05T14:50:37.279+01:002015-09-05T14:50:37.279+01:00Hi Eric,
I'll think about the eye surgery bu...Hi Eric, <br /><br />I'll think about the eye surgery but there's a good reason for not doing it that I can't tell you. <br /><br />And I haven't forgotten about the voices. <br /><br />Emma Emma Finnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02026867289162806363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-17325588570903405792015-09-05T11:11:07.336+01:002015-09-05T11:11:07.336+01:00Tut, Tut, there's more going on than this. Deh...Tut, Tut, there's more going on than this. Dehalia's hard for us to understand because, I hope , we not having a nervous break downor eben have gon ceazy. Temeber D already before her brother's death wanted to swap places with M. Not just in a rathr kinky rolingplaying way either. She wanted to ruin her eyes! That's goingbeyong=d the bonds of fanyasyinto madness. I recommnedto any who havenot read it yet. Cleaner , the fiirst book. We findout that Dalhia had a nervous break down when her parents were killed & stopped working. She proably still han't totally recovered & her brother & Katherine are thinking about having her committd again.<br />Of course her brother's death sends her completely over the edge into going abroad & titally swapping places with M.<br />Well now is kind enough to thank her for letting her be the wealthy &veautiful Miss Westerm. & lookks like she's going to give the poor patetic 'M' a treat by takingher out with her. HOw KIND.<br /><br />Emma, don't forget about the voices.<br />Also, have you given any more though to laskit eye surgerny for M? Its commonplace now & is over in a day.eotten2001https://www.blogger.com/profile/15037344663933155088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-39518903002433212102015-09-04T21:12:08.835+01:002015-09-04T21:12:08.835+01:00Well I couldn't have put it better myself.
(...Well I couldn't have put it better myself. <br /><br />(Shakes Dave by the hand) Emma Finnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02026867289162806363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-26622535591662598842015-09-04T19:06:57.587+01:002015-09-04T19:06:57.587+01:00To answer those asking why Dahila would do this - ...To answer those asking why Dahila would do this - I think Emma did an amazing job detailing all the reasons. Her brother died and she couldn't deal with it. Sometimes denial can be so extreme that people disassociate from themselves. From that point on, life is like watching a movie. Instead of experienceing events and emotions directly, it is more like watching some other person experience them. Dahila is also sexually excited by this, and I think we all know what that is like! She isolated herself for a long time after she stopped working. She didn't have time to maintain friendships when she was modeling, as she was being whisked around the world and working all day. Now she feels very close to Melissa, and feels like there is a wonderful man waiting for her. She believes this because she WANTS to believe it, and in a way she NEEDS to believe it. Going back to her old life would mean dealing with the pain of losing her brother, and going back to the loneliness, and that scares her. Of course, if she ever stopped drinking and overeating long enough to think clearly during her free time for more than 5 minutes, she would realize that all she has to do is spend more time dating back home after she gets back in shape, and maybe spend more time with Katherine and maybe even Melissia. But she is running low on free time and her drinking and eating sessions have morphed into full blown addictions. She might never get that 5 minutes of clear thinking... Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02992829497117847306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-35823352247892305832015-09-03T23:43:12.343+01:002015-09-03T23:43:12.343+01:00I'm officially published on amazon! I sent yo...I'm officially published on amazon! I sent you a copy. Thank you for the help!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02992829497117847306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-88526609893245002692015-09-02T19:56:47.363+01:002015-09-02T19:56:47.363+01:00Thanks Dave! Thanks Dave! Emma Finnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02026867289162806363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-46665942885279945922015-09-02T19:56:35.037+01:002015-09-02T19:56:35.037+01:00Some humiliation will follow. Some humiliation will follow. Emma Finnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02026867289162806363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-52236541243283035042015-09-02T19:56:04.263+01:002015-09-02T19:56:04.263+01:00Well give it time. You'll know soon enough!Well give it time. You'll know soon enough! Emma Finnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02026867289162806363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-64376800975852892015-09-02T18:08:47.326+01:002015-09-02T18:08:47.326+01:00Just perfect!Just perfect!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02992829497117847306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-21141577259942034662015-09-02T16:54:02.337+01:002015-09-02T16:54:02.337+01:00Excellent Emma,
Dahlia`s acting like a puppy despe...Excellent Emma,<br />Dahlia`s acting like a puppy desperate for her "mistress`s attention.<br />I like the way you`ve set the scene for the next instalment, where are they going,<br />shopping? Wherever it is I suspect that Dahlia is going to find it exquisitely humiliating or enjoyable, which of course is one and the same thing if you suffer from Dahlia`s particular form of masochism.<br /><br />BillA.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-36512910373989053102015-09-02T15:35:24.884+01:002015-09-02T15:35:24.884+01:00She didn’t have my facial features (though hers we...She didn’t have my facial features (though hers weren’t a million miles from mine), but she was similar enough in other ways that a member of the public who followed my modelling career might almost have thought she was really me – if they were told as m“<br />(LOL! you're cheating, Emma)<br /><br />Thanks to your generosity and kindness,” said Melissa, I feel like a princess. I used to have a drinking problem – did you know that? I used to drink all the time, just to dull the ache I felt from living my life; from looking the way I did.” <br />( after saying this how in hell is M going to get D to swich lives even in England? I can't wait to see how you do it?)<br />“I’m so grateful to you,” she said. “So grateful that you gave me the chance to live your life and find out what it’s like. I love it so much.” (Again after this why wuld Poor D agree to be Melissa?) this reinforced as they wlk through the hotel with M geting the admiration & D geting the despise? abso0ulelhy chilling scene ,. M is now Dahlia & D is now Meliissa totally while they are in Greece<br /><br />Only 3 options occure to my feeble brain. 1) M tricks D into having P)Lasric surgey somehow by maybe pretending it is something else?<br />2) M brain washes D so throughly that she agrees to swap faces & lives because she loves or HAS to do what M now tells her<br />3) M convinces poor D into believing she's no longer worthy of being the famous model Dahlia & is only fit to be fat Melissa, while Meliisa is the onlhy one worthy of going back to be Dahlia in England. That D would disgrace her family & former life & friends now.<br /><br />What will Emma chose? Proably none of the above in her twisted genius. But I can't wait.!!eotten2001https://www.blogger.com/profile/15037344663933155088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-68672462036748304572015-09-02T13:18:54.252+01:002015-09-02T13:18:54.252+01:00Yes. Dahlia does love her submission. And Melissa ...Yes. Dahlia does love her submission. And Melissa loves to press her buttons. Emma Finnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02026867289162806363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-15301085311721188032015-09-02T13:18:02.360+01:002015-09-02T13:18:02.360+01:00I think Melissa has mixed feelings about it but sh...I think Melissa has mixed feelings about it but she's certainly enjoying the irony. Emma Finnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02026867289162806363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-21447310157550255512015-09-02T13:17:25.651+01:002015-09-02T13:17:25.651+01:00Well stonking is what Emmas do best. Well stonking is what Emmas do best. Emma Finnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02026867289162806363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-13857750277456701892015-09-02T13:17:10.150+01:002015-09-02T13:17:10.150+01:00Thanks Eric! I'm glad you liked it.Thanks Eric! I'm glad you liked it. Emma Finnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02026867289162806363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-81769450098173912772015-09-02T12:54:14.156+01:002015-09-02T12:54:14.156+01:00Perfect! Dahlia loves Melissa in a submissively sa...Perfect! Dahlia loves Melissa in a submissively saphic way, Mellisa has contempt for D. . it makes sense for them to be together so that D can serve M and M can enjoy humiliating her and continuing to steal her identity.FinnfannAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-65206148814378105992015-09-02T08:07:07.144+01:002015-09-02T08:07:07.144+01:00“Thanks to your generosity and kindness, I feel li...“Thanks to your generosity and kindness, I feel like a princess."<br />That´s what Melissa tells Dahlia before hugging her, expressing her "thankfulness".<br />What M really thinks might be more like "Thanks to your goofiness, your neuroses and mental disorders, I now live your life and will make it mine forever."<br />Or was her hugging of D actually motivated by a sudden streak of kindness or even honest gratitude? Time will tell...<br /><br />marc<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-10947047086344308792015-09-02T06:14:01.533+01:002015-09-02T06:14:01.533+01:00Yes I agree a real stonker of a chapter this is tu...Yes I agree a real stonker of a chapter this is turning out to be. Loving every moment of it - Mike WAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-52698565673859343412015-09-02T02:56:48.831+01:002015-09-02T02:56:48.831+01:00One of your best chapters! Terrific! Boy is poor D...One of your best chapters! Terrific! Boy is poor D messed up. Nice touch that M is is even in better shape that D was when they left - at least as far as being althetic. The scene inthe lift was chilling, 'mirror mirror on the wall, who is the fairest one of all?' <br />sinicestly funny that M is 'praising & thanking D - perhaps to bury her? <br />Chilling the way D notices how people reaction to 'Miss Western' & & to her as they walk through the hotel. she loves & hates it at the same time. <br />Even their postures have changed, D is now slumping & shuffling & having to almost run to keep up & M walks straiht & proud. & striding confidently.. I love the descriptions of their hairs.<br />I canfeel the flutterof bat wings decepnding on poor D. eotten2001https://www.blogger.com/profile/15037344663933155088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-14517004327094633032015-09-02T00:33:03.488+01:002015-09-02T00:33:03.488+01:00"I used to have a drinking Problem. I drank ..."I used to have a drinking Problem. I drank all the time." I wonder what effect telling dahlia that will have. Johnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17491333318454995808noreply@blogger.com