tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post5159303284657060385..comments2023-10-26T09:25:58.049+01:00Comments on Emma Finn's Dark Tales of Transformation: CLEANER II: Chapter Three - Part Five Emma Finnhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02026867289162806363noreply@blogger.comBlogger24125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-26304151156078295452015-06-12T13:29:58.379+01:002015-06-12T13:29:58.379+01:00Hmmm... Hmmm... Emma Finnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02026867289162806363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-74903154446505023522015-06-12T13:10:59.127+01:002015-06-12T13:10:59.127+01:00In re=reading this pivot chap I think one thing yo...In re=reading this pivot chap I think one thing you might want to add hear whenyou prepare he final book is have the trainer & others address M as MISS WESTON & how much M enjoys being sp address & treated with deference. eotten2001https://www.blogger.com/profile/15037344663933155088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-13410735725363956612015-04-21T14:24:51.125+01:002015-04-21T14:24:51.125+01:00Yeah. That is an almost preposterous step. For it ...Yeah. That is an almost preposterous step. For it to be justified psychologically I'm going to have to work hard! Emma Finnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02026867289162806363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-21090277359429801632015-04-21T14:24:09.253+01:002015-04-21T14:24:09.253+01:00Well they may be meeting sooner than you think but...Well they may be meeting sooner than you think but their relationship will already have change dramatically. Emma Finnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02026867289162806363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-62463957154167983672015-04-21T14:23:38.560+01:002015-04-21T14:23:38.560+01:00Thanks Bill. I think you're right!Thanks Bill. I think you're right! Emma Finnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02026867289162806363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-90524935953542068482015-04-21T14:23:22.618+01:002015-04-21T14:23:22.618+01:00Yeah. Both are becoming fascinated by a trade for ...Yeah. Both are becoming fascinated by a trade for their different reasons. The reason I like this expanded version is the idea of trying to understand why two women would really want to do that. Emma Finnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02026867289162806363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-41442467944065294522015-04-21T08:35:05.448+01:002015-04-21T08:35:05.448+01:00You`re doing fine so far Emma,
I think you may fin...You`re doing fine so far Emma,<br />I think you may find it easier when Melisa`s new found confidence and Dahlia`s growing insecurity become apparent.<br /><br />BillA Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-46110956458795385832015-04-21T05:58:43.640+01:002015-04-21T05:58:43.640+01:00I suppose there is also an inevitability about the...I suppose there is also an inevitability about the plastic surgery too. I mean we got our first mention of it here in the form of liposuction. For them to swap when back home, that will be necessary. That is an extremely powerful tool and to wield it, I guess further changes in both character's psychology are necessary for that massive step to take place - Mike WAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-33679083220822689792015-04-20T22:41:18.675+01:002015-04-20T22:41:18.675+01:00one of the things I like is how "close" ...one of the things I like is how "close" they are to each other. when you think about it there are only a few differences in choices and actions that are repeated to great cumulative effect, but that initial start is as small as the proverbial fork in the road. Johnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17491333318454995808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-40988661340415839272015-04-20T16:46:07.255+01:002015-04-20T16:46:07.255+01:00This particular episode inspired lots of comments,...This particular episode inspired lots of comments, Glad we are back in track here.<br />I also think that the psychological aspect is quite important.<br />Dahlia's morale will drop continuously from now on and Melissa's will shoot up. When they meet again will be a very interesting encounter.<br />Monica G.<br /><br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-49739704273794937622015-04-20T16:22:03.156+01:002015-04-20T16:22:03.156+01:00Thanks Eric! Hatred is a strong motivator unfortun...Thanks Eric! Hatred is a strong motivator unfortunately. Emma Finnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02026867289162806363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-54401562717229373952015-04-20T16:20:20.278+01:002015-04-20T16:20:20.278+01:00The writing i, as always first rate. I like the wa...The writing i, as always first rate. I like the way you are using Meliisa's hayred as a powerful movvation. eotten2001https://www.blogger.com/profile/15037344663933155088noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-67841497977928292642015-04-20T16:11:40.371+01:002015-04-20T16:11:40.371+01:00Hmmm. Yes. I like the idea of taking on health iss...Hmmm. Yes. I like the idea of taking on health issues. <br /><br />The next thing we need to think about is background information though. Emma Finnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02026867289162806363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-82170969527688009932015-04-20T16:08:04.336+01:002015-04-20T16:08:04.336+01:00This is not about practicalities at all! As a matt...This is not about practicalities at all! As a matter of fact, just eating a lot of food is far more practical than undergoing a potentially life-threatening surgical procedure. The reason why I find this scenario interesting is precisely because it fits your idea of "alteration of self-esteem" very strongly as Dahlia will literally be taking all the "pitiful things" from Melissa, including her own fat. The idea suggested by someone earlier of Melissa using Dahlia's cut-off hair as hair extensions is somewhat similar. That's the closest they can get to body swap without using magic.<br /><br />That is why the whole idea of Dahlia destroying her eyesight is so powerful. To take this even further, she may even deliberately develop an embarrassing or just annoying decease or health condition that Melissa has (but will now completely get rid of it because she can now afford it financially and is starting a new life). Could be anything from some veneral decease like moniliasis to something as banal as really bad teeth - in either case it will be a constant reminder to Dahlia of her new status in life. A milder version of that could be getting an exact copy of an indecent tattoo that Melissa got as a teenager (and will now remove, of course, as not fitting her new life). <br /><br />Camille Langtryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16945716778850774065noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-9189458210076375242015-04-20T12:49:26.882+01:002015-04-20T12:49:26.882+01:00I am also looking forward to that. I'm finding...I am also looking forward to that. I'm finding it a delicate balance to juggle. Emma Finnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02026867289162806363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-30763844630310546302015-04-20T12:43:58.082+01:002015-04-20T12:43:58.082+01:00Hi Emma,
I personally have never considered the am...Hi Emma,<br />I personally have never considered the amount of weight that Dahlia gains as that important especially given that she now has a manual job and is burning calories in the process.<br />More important to me is the psychological aspect of the ruined eyesight and the way she is perceived and treated by others intensifying her low self esteem.<br />Great work by the way, I love the way you`re expanding Melissa`s view and I`m looking forward to the time when she starts to "turn the screw" by pushing Dahlia`s masochistic buttons.<br /><br />BillAAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-82850430572562090972015-04-20T11:18:12.141+01:002015-04-20T11:18:12.141+01:00Yeah. I like the idea of the reverse liposuction b...Yeah. I like the idea of the reverse liposuction but I think it's pushing the believability (which is already somewhat stretched). <br /><br />This story is all about the social and physical change and the altyeration of self-esteem. That has to be the leading factor. The actual practicalities of gaining and losing weight won't be the main focus - though will be referred to regularly. Emma Finnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02026867289162806363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-30851814796703803122015-04-20T11:16:14.159+01:002015-04-20T11:16:14.159+01:00Hmmm. Yeah. The realism of the weight gain and los...Hmmm. Yeah. The realism of the weight gain and loss is something that may be controversial at times but we may need to not think too hard about it. <br /><br />Certainly I know that it's possible to put quite a bit of weight on over the course of a week or two (think Christmas) and that's when someone isn't actively trying - just exposed to a lot of available food. <br /><br />I think if one were actively trying to put on weight and had all you can eat buffets for breakfast, dinner and tea then things would progress pretty swiftly. Emma Finnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02026867289162806363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-78131083420929878522015-04-20T11:14:01.367+01:002015-04-20T11:14:01.367+01:00I think you're right and I think the hatred is...I think you're right and I think the hatred is necessary. In the original story we didn't delve into Melissa's reasons for making the change but we are now and it's interesting to do so. Emma Finnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02026867289162806363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-45690264565942415822015-04-20T11:13:01.141+01:002015-04-20T11:13:01.141+01:00I don't. How do you thinkI manage to publish a...I don't. How do you thinkI manage to publish a new book every month? <br /><br />(Grins broadly) Emma Finnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02026867289162806363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-16377068965167255462015-04-20T11:00:13.637+01:002015-04-20T11:00:13.637+01:00Hurray! Back on track for now!
I like Camille&#...Hurray! Back on track for now! <br /><br />I like Camille's idea for reverse liposuction (lipoinflation?) for a faster result. I suspect the return trip in a few month's time will have to be with each other's passports and with the new Dahlia in first class with the former one cramming her bulk into tourist.<br /><br />Thanks Emma<br /><br />Robyn HAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-28789200009756679272015-04-20T03:28:15.136+01:002015-04-20T03:28:15.136+01:00Wonderful, Melissa is back! That is a very ambitio...Wonderful, Melissa is back! That is a very ambitious program, even with liposuction. Wondering what will happen faster - Dahlia gaining fat or Melissa losing it? As an idea, perhaps there is a way to save the fat from Melissa's future liposuction and inject it into Dahlia as part of a fat transfer or "reverse liposuction" surgery? After all, relying on Dahlia's appetite to get to Melissa's original size may take way too long. Camille Langtryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16945716778850774065noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-55629356208978840102015-04-19T23:21:31.690+01:002015-04-19T23:21:31.690+01:00Ironically I'm guessing that that hatred will ...Ironically I'm guessing that that hatred will only grow as they both change.Johnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17491333318454995808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8240186143329612112.post-52877318074672063882015-04-19T22:31:01.238+01:002015-04-19T22:31:01.238+01:00don't every underestimate the power of obsessi...don't every underestimate the power of obsession. Johnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17491333318454995808noreply@blogger.com